tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17952719.post3845778411940482546..comments2011-02-09T10:22:19.336-08:00Comments on The Word: ArmoireAgnibarathihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11168495307511184238noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17952719.post-18601002747284135592008-04-09T22:21:00.000-07:002008-04-09T22:21:00.000-07:00Passionate. #'Dress' is a word I don't like here, ...Passionate. <BR/><BR/>#'Dress' is a word I don't like here, but frankly have no clue what you can replace it with :-)...<BR/><BR/>#'Stretching ocean in a single drop' is lovely.<BR/><BR/>#'laying its weariness<BR/>like a dewdrop on the grass<BR/>for your sun to drink.' is even more lovely than all else here.<BR/><BR/># 'matching my work to your<BR/>immediate glory' - this is great poetry. How DID you think of such a combination of words to express just this great thought is beyond my layman sensibilities; but, I enjoyed it immensely. Thanks.<BR/><BR/># 'receiving and giving all that is forever' would have been perfect without the flowing river at the end I think. Because then it speaks of the beauty of the temporal actions of taking and giving from all that is always there anyway. But yes, a beautiful stanza again.<BR/><BR/># Very enjoyable reading.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com